Kari
Posts : 96 Pokècoins : 72 Join date : 2018-03-23 Age : 24 Location : Hell
| Subject: Joey - Whiskers Sat Mar 24, 2018 10:12 am | |
| [J O E Y] Character Name : Josephine Brown D.O.B : 11 | 22/08 Height : 4'7" Weight : 70 lbs Hair Color : Brown Eye Color : Brown Hometown : Zinnia Town Siblings : All of them are her older brothers (and NPCs), and they all go by the nickname Joey~ Joseph & Jonathan (twins) Joshua Jordan John & Joe (twins) Joziah Jonas Joshan Joah Starting PokemonSpecies: Rattata/Male Nickname: Whiskers Ability/Nature: Hustle/Adamant Moves: Tackle, Quick Attack, Flame Wheel, Tail Whip
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Echo
Posts : 221 Pokècoins : 159 Join date : 2018-03-02
| Subject: Re: Joey - Whiskers Sat Mar 24, 2018 11:25 pm | |
| Heya. We discussed this as a staff already, and we're going to be rejecting this application for now. Our main reasons are the result of the Pokemon's moveset; while we fact-checked to make sure that these were indeed egg moves, we deemed it'd be unfair for your Pokemon to have such powerful moves (Final Gambit and Flame Wheel) right off the bat when everyone else still has a lackluster set. If possible, please switch one or both of the moves out for a more reasonable one.
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Kari
Posts : 96 Pokècoins : 72 Join date : 2018-03-23 Age : 24 Location : Hell
| Subject: Re: Joey - Whiskers Sat Mar 24, 2018 11:51 pm | |
| Alright! Does this work alright? I thought two might be a little unreasonable but I figured I'd try it ^-^
Is keeping Flame Wheel alright? I'd like to keep at least that egg move if possible so that (as Rattata is a really weak pokemon in terms of move pool and stats) she has some sort of edge later on. If not, that's alright! Just let me know <3
(Also going for the egg move because it's gotta be in the "top percentage" of Rattata. Memetic reasons ya know?) | |
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Echo
Posts : 221 Pokècoins : 159 Join date : 2018-03-02
| Subject: Re: Joey - Whiskers Sun Mar 25, 2018 7:46 pm | |
| ApprovedYou can now get your first Pokemon! | |
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